kikikkii 发表于 2021-12-22 23:27   全显示 1楼
肉戏的文笔是真的好，希望作者可以在后期多加入一些场景玩法，比如在千仞雪的天使考核中让她堕落，让比比东在王座上做爱，然后就是希望能多一些服装和丝袜等，还有就是希望可以有女角色堕落之后，忍受不住，主动勾引男主做爱的桥段，明明有淫纹这些好用的道具，却没有感受出来作用。
以上仅作建议，作者可以适当采纳
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