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[潛龍] 【仙侠魔踪】第七集 / 第八回：芙蓉金阁

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1楼 大 中 小 发表于 2010-5-22 18:39  显示全部帖子
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一口气看了这么多，楼主的肉戏着实精彩！但文章情节是否有些平淡，主角一直没有和强者交锋，最大的反派罗刹女的戏份是否显得太少。对于宫廷争斗，我一直认为它应该充满阴谋诡计，杀伐决断。觉得楼主写的有点优柔了！希望能对楼主有帮助！

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